#winningOriginally Posted by DonVigo
Okay, so, for the positive: The stairsets in this park skate well.
For the more realistic: I get the humor behind calling yourself "the greatest ever," but the schtick is already wearing thin. I'm sure you get some sort of trollesque kick out of all the flack you're getting but just in case you REALLY think this highly of yourself, lemme share a few critiques.
- A couple mile long block ledges surrounding symmetrical fountains? Pretty bland and unimaginative use of space. Same can be said about the too-long runup to the obvious Hubba Hideout wannabe set. You could fit A LOT more stuff in these spaces, or tighten them up, and improve your parks by leaps and bounds.
- Again, there's a total lack of variety here. A couple ledges, a couple stairsets... Are there even any decent gaps or any semi hidden content? Pretty much staples for what one would call a top level CAP.
- Create some damn atmosphere. The REAL CAP builders listed above (Plus Deuce and Fully, and anyone I don't know well enough to mention) do their best work by creating a feel to their work. Something that feels almost like another part of the game, and not just the downtown lot. Create buildings, use more landscaping, do something unique. This is pretty damn generic.
- Quit riding your own nuts... Enough said. If you're honestly talented, the work will speak for itself. Beyond the playground and Lil' Wayne style rap, the self boasting thing is complete and utter bullshit. You could put out a ten, call it an eleven, and it would get knocked down to a six in most peoples' mind just because you're acting bigger than your britches.
Thanks for playing, try again.
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