This was a hard watch, the cameras are so jerky and flying all over the place that it reminds me of this parody-video Notedderk did a while back:


Anyways, work on the cameras, a lot. Watch other videos here on the forum or just watch some real life-skatevideos and try to imitate that.
And for the tricks, I'm just gonna leave that to you. You skate however you want.

Only positive thing I can say is that you chose a good song, I love that song.

But yeah, you can take some of my tips into use or just ignore them. Do your thing. Just giving my opinions on your video.